why we should stop using palm oil

For writing, we had to do a piece of persuasive writing.  I did mine about why we should stop using palm oil because tigers and apes are becoming extinct. What do you think?  I used google to research which products have palm oil in them that we use daily. This is my first piece of persuasive writing, I think that my next one will be better now I know some good sentence starters to use.

The very interesting cartoon character

For reading, we read Barking Mad. Our teacher asked us to do a character description of one of the characters. My friend Cameron and I did the tiny policeman. We did the tiny policeman because he was super funny, we hope you like it. If you have read Barking Mad before please tell me which one is your favorite character.