Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 2, 2020
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Kia ora, I love your poem about the staple gun it was really funny, my sister actually did something similar to that. Yes I have done something naughty, my dad made a huge pavlova when I was little and I stuck my finger into the cream ate ate a huge glob of it. Next time you could work on your punctuation. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Kia ora Zoe,
ReplyDeleteI really love to idea in your poem. I have all sorts of ideas about what could have happened with the staple gun. I'm glad it just went into the draw ...
Also, I want to say that your title is really eye catching and inviting. It will make lots of people want to read your blog.
Keep up the great blogging,
Sharon
The old staple in our draw. Good times
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